End Of Hope Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

End Of Hope

Rating: 5.0


Birds Wings are Broken
The Wind blowing Forever
Hopes Remain unspoken
Thrown in a Moving River


Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scott Austin 28 January 2009

Well spoken for such few words…may peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday. Scott

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J. P. Dullahan 30 January 2009

A remarkable poem - 4 short lines full of powerful imagery and feeling. Excellent writing.

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Reetessh Sabrr 28 March 2009

Its a 4 line copy that even every child is familiar with, hope we revisit our kindergarten innocence with sarah's quintessence!

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Akram Awadat 03 February 2009

very nice poem, well done thanks a lot

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Sadiqullah Khan 31 January 2009

Small lines great meaning. Hopes are bit unfortunate things.10

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 January 2009

however we taking a breathes, , no there no end of hope.. beautiful one... hazem al..

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Yasser Koor 31 January 2009

hope is good to have but just like the rocks in river are fallin just like someone one the water walkin u can touch the hope but we can keep it

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