Amusment Park Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Amusment Park

Rating: 5.0


Place called fairy land
Lights and castels highly stand

Land of Million Lights
Laughters reach mountain heights

where Lonely hearts starts to enjoy
the Air of happines and joy

Land where you can hide in
when life forces you to Give in

Screams coming from a rollercoster
and stress finally get its moistur

Fairy wheels hug the skies
and souls free their Longing sigh

Bupming cars run into each other
about it Drivers wont Bother

Its where you can scream you heart out
and you wont worry about falling apart

Even it its called Insane
It's Much better than a Life so Plain

Coz Sometimes you find your serenity
in a place filled with insanity

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffanie Lau 23 January 2008

Hi this poem is extremely enjoyable. while it is easy to digest it's still really well written. esp since most lines contrast each other, the juxtaposition is so clear: eg Coz Sometimes you find your serenity in a place filled with insanity keep penning!

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Risha : Ahmed 20 November 2008

Yes I can't agree more. Amusement parks are real fun where you can scream your heart out. A beautiful subject closer to my heart.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 November 2008

A beautiful and highly meaningful poem.

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Liu-ai Thu Sheba 15 October 2008

one state of mind is not enough, one world is not enough, another one of your pearls.

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 June 2008

the last lines are so good, , , , ,

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Risha : Ahmed 13 April 2008

Sarah...This is one fantastic poem. And yes, I have enjoyed the ride too!

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