Enchantment (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Enchantment (Senryu)

Rating: 4.7


She truly believed
That distance lends enchantment
And distanced herself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

perfect...physical distance may sustain enchantment...good one makes one think on relationship

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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

getting yourself absent to make your heart grow fonder.

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

nice one doesnt absence makes the heart grow fonder? -10 anjali

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

moving few lines indeed...i was enchanted 10 regards shan..

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Patti Masterman 24 August 2009

It's probably the best idea: so of course I never do it. Well framed words in your senryu.

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2009

it hit me on my face!

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Catrina Heart 11 June 2009

Beautiful senryu in vividness! Thanks! ! !

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

good idea.meaningful..grace

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I went straight to this Senryu and chuckled. What a sharp and clever wit you have! 10 Karin Anderson

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