Empathy Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Empathy

Rating: 5.0


We are all so different
Yet so alike
We have felt the suffering
On a dark mountainous hike

We support one another
Stand strong side by side
Face up to our past
Never wanting to hide

Never fear, for when your'e here
No-one can hurt you again
Wipe up those tears with the sunshine (from rain)
Unlock the doors and release all your pain

Once this hurdle is over
A great life can be found
And the rainbow & blue sky
Makes love on solid ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Benfield 17 April 2007

Simply beautiful Lisa, I love the way you metaphorically compare all this emotion which you seek to overcome as a hurdle, a wall. I love it.

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David Harris 02 April 2007

Lisa, beautiful rhyme all the way through. Lovely sentiment in there too. Lifts one from the doldrums and makes them say, I really love this I do. Top Marks from me. Thank you for sharing it my friend. David

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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2006

The more I'm reading of your work, the better it gets, Wow! what a packet of gems Love Duncan x

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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