Eclipse Of Night And Day Poem by Britney Hogue
Eclipse Of Night And Day
The salty ocean air
And the crashing white caps
Of the wide open beach serenity
In my wildest fantasies
And most vivid dreams
None could be conceived
As perfect as this scene
White stallion and black mare
Walking flank to flank
Looks as day and night
Walking together in one place
You support the day and I night
Joined in the middle
With my left in your right
We find the perfect sandy spot
Dismount night and day
And let them go their way
They stride straight away
In perfect uniform unison
They rear and paw ocean air
Before running to horizon
We look to the blue sky
As moon draws closer
To her lover, the bright sun
In an almost dancing grace
Moon slides in front of sun
As if in the sky they embrace
Creating the eclipse of night and day
beautifully knotted poetic skill with nature......fantastic......and hatsup. My child really you have well written.
A mistic movement of shade and light that flows into an ocean of beauty.
the eternal lovers the moon and the sun...lovely picture in this poem
Britney this is a nice blending of metaphors to make a fine flowing and drifting poem. Regards Mark
A vivid and enchanting poem so skilfully executed. The last stanza to tie into the title is brilliant. 10/10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 3:43:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A spiritual convergence of nature and romance! Excellent composition.