Britney Hogue

Rookie (the 15th day of the 5th month in the year 1991 / somewhere but no where/ Oklahoma)

Two Halves Of A Soul (Song) - Poem by Britney Hogue

A beautiful new spring day
The grass, new tender and green
The trees, sprouting new leaves
A small rose vine climes a tree
And flowers pedals of scarlet red

‘A crystal pond paces away
All the little golden sun perch
Enjoying its fresh sparkling waters
A flock of pure white swans
Swimming their graceful way

A perfect wedding, for a perfect love
As we hold our hands so tightly
And look so deep in each others eyes
We know the other is the one
The missing half of our loving soul

Two collared dove light in a tree
And coo a sincere love song
It sounds like it was written for us
As we walk this pedal sprinkled aisle
Pledge our vowls and say “I do”

A perfect wedding, for a perfect love
As we hold our hands so tightly
And look so deep in each others eyes
We know the other is the one
The missing half of our loving soul


Comments about Two Halves Of A Soul (Song) by Britney Hogue

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/7/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Everything is so perfect and beautiful on your way to become one from two souls. Your images are lovely and the work flows exceptionally well. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 70 Points Indira Babbellapati (5/6/2009 3:08:00 AM)

    ur verse simply flows like silk! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shekhar Joshi (5/5/2009 2:11:00 PM)

    Imagery is wonderful.
    the piece so lovely and sweet
    loved this one
    excellent work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (5/5/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    When all love is combined, fused and as one...lovely piece, well written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 11, 2009


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