Dry Scorched Land Awaits Monsoon Rains Poem by Terence George Craddock

Dry Scorched Land Awaits Monsoon Rains

Rating: 5.0


season sliver pain comes in monsoon rains
prevailing wind blowing tempest rain storms
oceanic sea breezes sweep in pain lash lands

Saturday, October 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,rain,rains,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in October 2020 on the 18.10.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'Tears' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.
Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.
See also 'Sorrow Dam Heart Strings', 'After Flood Comes Calm' and 'Silver Fish Leap High In Silver Moonlight Glow' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 17 October 2020

We will meet in many poetic expressions Varsha, as Paul and I also met, in the love of the lines, where like the moth to light, the bee to honey, poets must meet in a shared love of poetry.

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Varsha M 17 October 2020

I always like your poetic expressions. They are really good. sea breezes sweep in pain lash lands.......wow Indeed pain lash land is really painful. season sliver pain comes in monsoon rains...... metaphorical beauty awesome. Thankyou

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Paul Brookes 17 October 2020

a beautifully flowing poem enjoyed the rhythm and flow rains come in on ocean breezes Well expressed

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