Drunk And Alone On A Saturday Night Poem by shannon wright

Drunk And Alone On A Saturday Night

Rating: 5.0


drunk and alone on a saturday night
a few glasses of wine is all it takes
its feels so good to ease the pain
he's thousands of miles away
and he holds not just the key to my heart
but the beating beast itself
he thinks i chose another
but i just chose persistance
because i'm scared of him
and his ability to devestate me
easier to drive him away now
than have him reject me later
12-15-07
by shannon flanders
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nicely written and it captures a lot of truth.

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Me Myself And I... 17 January 2008

easier to drive him away now than have him reject me later Powerful, well written lines

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Kitti Manson 07 January 2008

'and he holds not just the key to my heart but the beating beast itself' - Favorite line, you are a good writer. Keep it up.

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shannon wright

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stuttgart, germany
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