Drown Poem by Destiny Avaritia

Drown



Life, life it brings you down
It has one goal; for you to drown
It won’t stop dragging until you’re in
Then all of a sudden the lights will dim
Farther and farther it drags you out
You’re so far gone you can’t shout
It pulls you under, you gasp for air
But in your heart you didn’t care
Life, life why even try?
Eventually, you know, you’re gonna die

Now you’re under
Now you’re gone
All because life’s so wrong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aury Cecile 27 May 2008

Nice job with the rhyming. I love how your poems are kiddish with such tender topics. It's as though your singing an emo song in a childish, singsong way =]. Very nice style. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. If you could please read over some of my poems. I would appericiate to hear what you think of them. Thanks.

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