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Rachel Nichols


Dreams VI Love in Paradise


my love and i look upon the night sky
and see many sparkling stars
sprinkled there
they are diamonds on black velvet

our first night together in this paradise
on the shores and silky sand
we are here
and he holds my hand

warm is the night breeze
and magic is in the air
i feel tingles
when he touches my hair

and yes i am mesmerized
when i look into his eyes
reflections of diamonds
from the night skies

first night in paradise
his touch a sensation
of love, desire
and anticipation

oh magic is in his lips
a kiss by ocean blue
so electrifying
sure this love is true!

Submitted: Sunday, January 12, 2014
Edited: Monday, January 13, 2014

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Thomas Vaughan Jones (1/21/2014 2:28:00 PM)

    A very sensitive poem, refreshingly free of all of those cliches about eternal love. Stars! Hand holding! Tingles! Desire and Anticipation! Now you can kiss him. MAGIC! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 416 Points Shahzia Batool (1/14/2014 12:46:00 AM)

    The montage continues...the readers are not allowed to let any worldy thought enter their minds... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Valsa George (1/12/2014 11:44:00 PM)

    In one breath, I have read the entire Dream series.... It was an effortless journey from the drought and famine stricken Earth to the new found Paradise of beauty and bliss!
    Here the lovers... away from all anxiety and care are lost in each others mesmerizing presence. They dream of a new Heaven! The first night is a night of anticipation and hope... of excitement and exultation! Let your divine love consumate into a fruitful, exhilarating experience!
    Amazing imagination! Sun princess... I always enjoy your world.. away from the real world! ! (Report) Reply

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