Draw String Poem by Lonnie Hicks

Draw String

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The curtains in my living room
lift and fall
gracefully
as I pull their strings each day;
marking the rise and fall of each
season
and each day in between-
punctuation
for the life between you and me.

Like my skirts
they lifted first
and fell
on our wedding bed
on our wedding night-
and now gracefully on special nights;

They rose to the realities
of married life-
fell during our dark times-
and ring during the good times
with loving making
and bedroom laughter.

I cannot
each time I draw
the strings
but marvel
at morning light;
folding away yet
another night
with you.
.
My curtains offer me regularity
which is comforting to me.

I dust them-
not often enough
worn with the years;

uplift them
for the view of the garden
and you coming home
over the back fence.


I draw them each time
anticipating
magically
in doing
so
you, too,
are drawn
home
to my bosom
each day.

Watch
as I draw
this string.

You'll see:
He'll be there

coming over
the back fence;
home to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 16 July 2009

From common object seen everyday You draw your metaphor for the night The nights of joy and love You compare to seasons gay And days so bright The curtains also make way For you to seek with hope The reunion of your love! Wonderful as always! Angel

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Chuck Petz 21 December 2008

Plays with memory and the heart Exquisitley!

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