Down With You. Poem by Christian K. Montiel

Down With You.



Down with you.
I’m here next to you on the couch so I close my eyes with your head on my chest and my breath on you hair unaware of all the things that may happen if we open our eyes so go ahead keep traveling on that land of the dreams where you brought a lot peace to me.
Since the begin of this it was a lot of things wrong but I didn’t care because I knew the soonest you close that door all the world disappear and is you and me, nothing else into this world bother me anymore I just to feel like I was home even that all this was a nightmare so wrong that you try to forget about it.
I think I left a part of me in you, I guess is in you arms or you lips or somewhere around you bed, but is just me here trying to let you go from life but I don’t know how and I remember what you told me “does even matter’’
But I know for you not but for me still because I did love when I was down with you.
Christian montiel

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Christian K. Montiel

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Tampico, Tamaulipas, Mex.
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