Bull Hawking


Down By The Rebar - Poem by Bull Hawking

I took a drink
Right then I begin to sink
Like a hammer drivin' pylons
Thoughts hit my brain
I think
And bridge a chasm
I stand on a brink
Pour is poor insubstantial concrete
Break it up you're dreamin'
In a simi-solid world

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Comments about Down By The Rebar by Bull Hawking

  • Gold Star - 16,104 Points Mandolyn ... (12/30/2014 10:27:00 AM)

    gosh. i put glasses on my invisible eye for this one. i will be serious and just say this is really good. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,887 Points Dave Walker (8/4/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    A fantastic poem, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013


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