Treasure Island

Bull Hawking


Down By The Rebar


I took a drink
Right then I begin to sink
Like a hammer drivin' pylons
Thoughts hit my brain
I think
And bridge a chasm
I stand on a brink
Pour is poor insubstantial concrete
Break it up you're dreamin'
In a simi-solid world

Submitted: Sunday, August 04, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 05, 2013
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