Dont Mind To Be Fine Poem by Unwritten Soul

Dont Mind To Be Fine

Rating: 5.0


We fall in different life
We live and choose different path
Still our hearts can be broken
Of many reasons, happy can be taken

Of all reasons why heart broken
From all then lead to one
Because we all human
Eventhough we bleed, life still undone

Between your hearts and mine
None can run, hurt can easily bind
Because the reason is one
We just human and its fine

Though we cant avoid to run
God heals us by flowing time

So take care when you think i dont mind
Above of all reasons come, I'm a human
So i can understand

Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: human being,nature,understanding
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today, Feb 27th i was inspired to write a poem for all my friends that i really care...lately all not going well, some of them but me as well..so i really wanted to write a poem bout that and but then i was thinking about before i making that poem, first I want to write another poem addressing about how common to be heartbroken...reason we are hurting badly because we are human...not only because of human, as long we have soul we do feel hurt...that goes to animals and who knows plants... so i just write this simple poem to tell its okay to be hurt because we cant avoid but just DONT MIND TO BE FINE again...just be fine soon or later.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 28 February 2018

Dear Soul, Hi. what is pain... sometimes a meter of life. and about every relation in life is gifted with pain, directly proposed to the amount of honesty and love in the relation. so, i think, in normal life, it is healthy to have a broken heart or gifted pain. The poem is very clear with positive message and a best title. best wishes friend

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Hi dear, pain is a test but sometimes can go wrong if we not able to handle it...to have a healthy broken heart is fine but this is the right time also for us to help them to heal so they may also do the same when others hurt. Like a chain reaction of cares and loves. Dear M.A you always give kind and nice way of saying to my work, thanks a lot. You too take care my friend :)

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Marieta Maglas 28 February 2018

A wonderful sad poem that is uniquely written.10

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Unwritten Soul 01 March 2018

Thanks dear marieta, i still remember your name because you are one of my early readers since i joined poem hunter. You always welcome back here :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 February 2018

We are human beings. We are souls. Soul drives the body. Through body it gets sadness and happiness. We face unusual situations. God heals us by flowing time. Dear soul, you have astutely and hauntingly inscribed this poem. Appreciated.

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Rajnish Manga 12 April 2018

The poem brings out a plausible philosophy of life which gets support from psychology and resilience is the force to reckon with. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2018

There is diversity in living and many choose many different paths. But we souls are brothers and we have universal love and affection. We find unity in diversity. Though we cant avoid to run still we trust on God. He heals our minds. This poem has great values and importance. Revisiting this values more...10

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Lyn Paul 12 March 2018

There is happy and sad for us all and we deal with it so differently. Its about not falling which happens to so many. Keeping that mind strong and positive. I know from my own experience. Beautiful words Soul and I love the title, Don't Mind To Be Fine Thank You

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Susan Williams 03 March 2018

Though we cant avoid to run God heals us by flowing time- - ] This couplet really speaks to me. God does heal us- it may seem a long time to us impatient want-it-now people but the healing is coming flowing toward us in God's wise time. Exquisitely said. 10

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Mj Lemon 02 March 2018

Soul, a wonderful insight into our humanity. We injure in completely unique ways, but feel and the share the pain alike....

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