Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Rookie - 38 Points (11.06.1960 / Philippines Manila)

Dont Ever Give Up Hope - Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Dont ever give up hope


dont ever give up hope
reaching the dark abyss
catch the throwen rope
chase the infernal pain
and crawl along the slope

don’t ever give up hope
waterfalls washes away stain
so just go ahead and dare
to stand straight under the rain
and I’ll be there to care

don’t ever give up hope
sorrow surfaces the deep
long days after days
you don’t have to keep
there are other ways

don’t ever give up hope
sure he is gone your lover
please don’t mind
although gone and over
keep the thoughts kind

don’t ever give up hope
it’s so beautiful to be free
after crouching in the shade
remember and look to see
the broken into two halfs blade

Don’t ever give up hope
Blinds must be opened wide
Let the sunbeams through
Give happiness a ride
Forever to be a part of you

(Switzerland)


Comments about Dont Ever Give Up Hope by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (10/19/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    don’t ever give up hope
    it’s so beautiful to be free
    after crouching in the shade
    remember and look to see
    the broken into two halfs blade

    a good poem with sweet written stanzas..really a gret poem..enjoyed it a lot..appreciate our work 10/10..quite inspiring work (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (6/12/2008 10:04:00 AM)

    A lovely poem with poetic vision...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 15, 2008


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