Candle Flame Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Candle Flame

Rating: 5.0


candle flame

sun has been shining through
the window screens today
warming our souls and bodies
counting this day as a new gift
thanking life for this blessing
measuring this passing day
with some gentle smiles
angel wings will fly them over
To lighten up at your place
a hazy blue candle flame flickering
through the thickening night!

(Switzerland)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2008

Oh I felt the magic of this one.........this really places you in a world of smiles. perfect '10' best wishes Jon

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Prasanna Kumari 29 April 2008

i feel a gentle breeze on my body while going through your poem....so soothing...beautiful poem...

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Marvin Brato 21 April 2008

I agree with RIC, such is full of hope and inspiration. A 10.

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Raj Nandy 15 April 2008

A beautiful poem Mencita. The candel for me is a symbol of divinity! -RAJ NANDY

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