Don'T Push Me Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

Don'T Push Me

Rating: 5.0


Don't you dare try
To push me to my limit
Coz' I can make you cry
Even though I don't mean it

I may not be the one
Who'd talk back when pushed
I may not be the one
Who'd fight back when ambushed

But I'm only controlling
The temper that remained
And I'm only preventing
For my temper to be drained

If this goes on and on
I might pull the wrong string
To win this competition
And live you only with nothing

So don't you let
Your arm guard down
You haven't won yet
Things might turn around

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Pascual 30 July 2009

this is a scary poem.. haha.. chillax dude, we're here.. we'll help you kill them.. LOL..XD

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Nashy Lamen 26 July 2009

The last too lines were so strong.. Very nicely expressed... The anger... Try to relax... To stress yourself too much..

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Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Venom and fire glaring from the words...One that possesses the ability to consume and turn the target to ashes..with nothing. A warning that will certainly insure a caution to be followed and implied. A perfect applause and keep on writing!

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