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Rating: 4.6


Do not listen to a voice of a witch...
Though she sings, is more melodious...
Do not tempt from flowers of her valley,
That, same - only a Mirage for us...
Your footpath through rainbows
Just was born again in a rain...
Do not listen to a voice of a witch...
From a colourless life, will die your dreams...
Her graceful hair is only web for your trap's...

19.01.09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 19 January 2009

Another good write from you Tsira, the voice of the witch is one to be ignored, 10 Lynda xx

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Tom Balch 19 January 2009

A lovely piece Tsira,10 regards Tom

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Kevin Carney 01 November 2010

A very short poem with so much. I think your imagery is fantasic in this. It a beautiful free flowing poem.10+++

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

A very compact but meaningful poem with an alarming message.........Mysterious though............10

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

A very compact but meaningful poem with an alarming message.........Mysterious though............10

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LOVEFOOL Aka 31 January 2009

very strong imagery and quite dark and mysterous Good write I enjoyed it Thanks 10

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Andrew Blakemore 23 January 2009

A deeply mystical and charming piece Tsira, very well written. Love, Andrew

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