'DON'T DIE ON ME NOW'!
I can't feel the flow
once you dropp I can never see you again ever
you'll be away from me forever
when you die who knows if we will remember each other
I'll have to think harder
please don't dissapper from me, I don't want to be alone
as I pause on the phone
as I try to call for help, while laying on the floor bleeding
I have a strange feeling
your not going to make it anymore
so why am I calling for help
if you decided to leave me then there is no point in helping you
I would take that attack if I could....
just take the attack
the attack could be a knife or a gun
this is not happy or fun
this is the end for you and me my long lost friend
my friend: (
I really like this. i read a couple of your poems and you obviously love poetry so keep at it.
Very good piece. I liked it. Keep on writing and sharing it.
I will not die on you! What a poem! I hope this never happened to you. Your talents: audacious, your promise: great and original; please let your pen flow and let the inspiration grow! I enjoy reading you. As for me, I will live long enough to read from your budding brain!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'll have to think harder please don't dissapper from me, I don't want to be alone as I pause on the phone as I try to call for help, while laying on the floor bleeding I have a strange feeling......really heart felt words in it and honest feelings..... keeptit up....10 read mine...miss i miss you............. i miss............ go to hell