Do You...? Poem by Angelic Warrior

Do You...?

Rating: 3.7


My brother holds only hate in his heart
He told me that today
There is only pain and hurt in this world
No one cares about you
According to him no one feels love
They simply feign affection
No man, no woman its all just a game
That's all that he can see
He blames me for his hatting heart
Just because i was born
He's never said he loves, but sometimes acts nice
But I have to wonder....
Were those brief moments just a show?

I have a question for you....
Do you LOVE?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 09 November 2009

i try to but sometimes its difficult. its obvious that you and your brother have been through alot. i hope everything gets better and that the hate in your brothers heart will go away and be replaced with love. great job. keep up the good work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2009

There is only pain and hurt in this world No one cares about you According to him no one feels love....love is universal things more u offer more n more u get inreurn.. there is no place for hate for our shortspan of lie....very good write....10 read mine...you go alone....prayer...humble submission

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Ruth Walters 05 September 2009

well I love lots of people and hope they love me back..... Ruthy: -)

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to live and not know love is not to live for love is comforting Love is kindhearted love is patient love is wise love is you love is me why not this he sees? i love you.

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to live and not know love is not to live for love is comforting Love is kindhearted love is patient love is wise love is you love is me why not this he sees? i love you.

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