* * Do I Have To? ? ? Poem by Luwi Habte

* * Do I Have To? ? ?

Rating: 5.0


Do I have to live
In a destroyed cave
For the sake of life
Which is not safe?

Do I have to love
Where there is no faith we have
For the sake of nature
Why should I suffer?

Do I have to hate
As long as I don`t have any fate
Also no body allow me to rate
Even for a current date?

Do I have to die
If God let me delay
Why should I do that to me
Why should I eat my life`s key? ? ?

Do I have to gave up
Over the small life`s gap
Why should I
For the troubles that will die?

Do I have to worry
As long as I have authority?

The Lord above my salvation
Solve all of my Question
Through the people on poem hunter station!

just a poem

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

interesting thought well penned

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Patrick A. Martin 23 July 2009

i like this one Luwi, I guess we are always asking these sorts of questions.

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Yelena M. 24 July 2009

I love the ending of the poem, Luwi.. :) Strong idea well expressed, thanks for sharing. A.

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Afzal Shauq 24 July 2009

Do I have to hate As long as I don`t have any fate Also no body allow me to rate Even for a current date? ? ? really a lovely and sweet poem...10/10

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Cash Cow 24 July 2009

OK Luwi, here goes. You don't have to agree with my opinions. First, you ask very important questions that you can answer best. The problem with rhyming is that it sometimes seems forced. You might investigate free verse, which can be more flexible, even more powerful if handled right. I don't know how much freedom you have to answer your questions truthfully. We all have to grow where we're planted. :)

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a person 30 July 2009

I agree with whats said here, you are a talented girl and world must be a safe haven for life. regards N&N

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Broken Heart 29 July 2009

yeah girl u have to live like every1 else...... btw great poem! ! i loved it... 10 frm me cheers regards broken heart

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 28 July 2009

Yes you really av to live.you are talented. the poem is really realistic.the composition is good THANKS FOR SHARING.

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Rafique Farooqi 27 July 2009

You are talented girl this poem an other great write, for peace.......world must be a safe haven for life........

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Emma Adamyan 27 July 2009

do i have to repeat myself saying ur a talented girl :) ? seems yes i do and thats my pleasure. the poem is sth else, as usual out of many others... u have to be strong, for the Glory goes straight to u, and it eats hearts of weak-will ppl. God be with u, Luwi

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