Distrubance Poem by Dean Bottomley

Distrubance



The Station cat opens one eye with a frown,
Disturbed as the Starter and Distant drop down.
The gas lamps still hiss, and a distant dog barks
The town Is a resting, wrapped up in the dark.

The Newspaper train rushes in with a roar,
And many a bundle flies out of a door.
There's bustle and noise as the papers they drop,
Then on down the line to the next lonely stop.

The Branch train creeps In from its home in the shed.
The driver is wishing he was tucked up in bed.
Some papers, some parcels, some milk, nothing more;
And never a passenger opens a door.

The cat slowly stretches in a moment of hush.
It knows that it's time for the everyday rush.
She’ll sleep on the signal box steps, and she'll snore,
Till the late setting sun brings the silence once more.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I like Railways and Cats, and tried to use words to make the second verse read faster than the others, and the third verse to read slower. Not certain I achieved my aim though
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 23 February 2014

The rhythm did come through in your write...like the chugging of the train, itself...I very much like your clever poem. Glad I stopped by the station, just in time to catch it.

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