…… Distant Shores Poem by Satish Verma

…… Distant Shores

Rating: 5.0


Twilight song of a cuckoo
taps the window softly.
Gothic tree and drooping sky
humble my thoughts.
Past was me.
I will know then
why your hills turned away my clouds
by shifting sands.

Was it a colossal guilt of tomorrow?
Which never wanted to become present
and enter my house.
But my memory was sharp
and days were numbered.

I wanted to invite the death discreetly
while praising the life and listening to birds
without dropping the history
from my crooked fingers.

Between yourself and myself
a sea was surreptitiously raging.
The waves were dividing the shores.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 16 June 2008

Great communion with nature!

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Goldy Locks 14 October 2007

you're a stimulating writer. keep on SusxGLx

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 April 2016

I wanted to invite the death discreetly while praising the life and listening to birds without dropping the history from my crooked fingers. Between yourself and myself a sea was surreptitiously raging. The waves were dividing the shores. The two best stanzas I have ever come across... Loved them. Felt the inner sorrows of some separation... Deeply touchy and nice work Sir. Many thanks for the poem. It deserves 10.

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Bert Bell 11 October 2010

Very nice indeed. Beautiful use of descriptive language and metaphor.

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Nikunj Sharma 12 August 2009

wonderfully written, quite stimulating. Readers shall run out of words of praise, as each of your poem is a marvel.........pls read my poem called CAN I BE A POET TOO?

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Ridge Cahill 09 January 2009

Simply riveting. To think death discreet and wish its invite as such is beautifully said. Excellent.

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Jay P. Narain 16 July 2008

Varma ji, your poems are great. I enjoy reading them. Thanks and keep on writing.

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