Discussion, Confusion And Separation Poem by Muzahidul Reza

Discussion, Confusion And Separation

Rating: 4.6


Two friends talked over a term
While travelling by a tram
One: What a life in me!
Full with happiness, luxury, satisfaction
Other: Are you happy?
One: No
Other: What a life in me!
Full with miseries, demand, deprivation
One: Are you sad?
Other: No
The talking ended at the desired stoppage
No one was victorious
Both were in confusion
They left the stoppage separately and lonely.



Muzahidul Reza
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Saturday, October 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: discontent
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Offeliya Seema 15 October 2016

Wonderful poem, it is very nice

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Frank (black) Blacharczyk 16 October 2016

Life is what you make of it. Nice imagery. You can have it all but still be unhappy

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John Paul 17 October 2016

What a great poem it is that tells reality of lives! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you for sharing, No one was victorious Both were in confusion They left the stoppage separately and lonely excellent finishing 10

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Pamela Sinicrope 20 October 2016

I see this so often when two people meet and talk yet never manage to connect or understand. Talking over a term on the tram....love those words. and the line, The talking ended at the desired stoppage conveys the theme through the words themselves. Thanks for sharing.

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Christian 04 March 2019

Great philosophy goes throughout the poem

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Mohendro Endro 27 June 2017

Discussion, Confusion And Separation, need pure sinfree mind to succeed, a great poem,10

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Sem Ralfh 18 November 2016

A great philosophy and psychology wonderfully invention, thanks for the poem

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Rose Kanana 04 November 2016

two different world views on how happiness is perceived..the ending spells it out. Well written

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 October 2016

Happiness is not vouched by money or by fulfilling material desires. The Vedic school that's why discerns between 'sukha' (pleasure) and 'Aanandam' (ecstasy) . What the Divine gives is AANANDAM and we must strive to achieve it.

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Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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