Direction Of Opposite Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Direction Of Opposite

Rating: 5.0


Rocky rains are hit
Dusty winds are blown
On me, to my side
Against and again
At my head and on my head
Bleeding drops
Pour down
Closing eyes in pain
Look at

Thunder blow and dark sky
Noisy drums on my ears
Under a broken umbrella
My soul'sstanding

A smalland a big stone
At my foot thrown
Should I cast back?

Silence, calmness, patience
Cure my pain
Cure your anger
Direction of opposite
Life no solution

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: anger,patience,revenge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Opposite of anger and revenge is patience. A strenuous but beautifulstrain.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 May 2018

Udaya, such a great write...10++++

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Manonton Dalan 24 May 2018

against the wind could be difficult ... well it might be shortest way? ? ?

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Nice poem. I like it.

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