Different Girl Poem by Steven Pimentel

love is in the mind and soul, and it is something that should be told. you can give your heart to a young lady, just don't get stupid and create a baby. another good write.

A 'different girl' at eighteen. Same girl when you're 19? 20? Watch this space...Ah, fickle mind! ! But all the best. Stay steadfast and true. Cheers. Subroto

yeah even when u have swine flu I will always say I do But AIDS is a different thing And I will return your wedding ring.............a good write............

Great you found your gal If she is different too Through your eyes Of this new age She must be God' gift to you. Let the love you now behold Remain ever true And never change Till life is through! Angel

Nicely executed poem of a loving tribute, to the girl, you like, or rather, love. Great imagery configured stanzas. A few typo's here or there. Still, all in all, an excellent poem, or ode. God bless the ones in love-MJG.

Ten out of ten for this one: -) Sweet and light hearted

A different girl From a different world So pure and true Made just for you To be with her There is nothing you won't do Love the poem a fresh look at love.

: D...........you can be with her but you have to put a piece of cloth on your mouth and your noze.........: D: D...i liked the last expression......good poem keep writing!

Lol nice poem dint expect that swine flu twist at the end: p

yeah this coool! ! ! indeeed.... this one i really liked.. you are good.. and i m sure you willl develop your poetic enigma in time! ! ! nice with love shan