Die(001) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Die(001)

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When will i die?
Until the god decides,
Never I can decide,
Since I was created by the god through my mom.
It is certain,
I will be leaving this world a day,
But not certain,
When will I leave this world.
I'm sure I will be alive tomorrow,
But anything could happen,
Which is uncertain.
I came to this world through my mom,
But will be exited from this world alone.
It is in hands of God,
But before leaving this world.

I need to sacrifice something to for society,
I don't won't to be selfish.
Because I was created by God,
To share the problems, sorrows or happiness
With each other.
I need to leave for more than a century,
But not to disturb other's,
Not to be disturbed.

Friday, July 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: didactic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 21 August 2019

It is in hands of God......well written. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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An interesting poem Ram! The moment we are born we are making a journey towards death. This is the truth of life. Yes, the time we are given by God has to be utilised in the right way. Service to humanity is the best. Right now, young man, you have a whole life ahead of you. Live a good and noble life.....10

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Prabir Gayen 27 July 2019

I need to sacrifice something to for society, I don't won't to be selfish. Because I was created by God, To share the problems, sorrows or happiness With each other. I need to leave for more than a century, But not to disturb other's, Not to be disturbed... very beautiful poem...///

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2019

'It is certain, I will be leaving this world a day, But not certain, When will I leave this world. I'm sure I will be alive tomorrow, But anything could happen, Which is uncertain.'.. is so true. We should do our duty as a citizen of this world with sincerity and honesty. Thanks for sharing such a great message.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

Our death is not certain when to come. It is on God' s hand, but it is sure that the death will come one day. So we have to do certain good works for the society before death. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated by you dear Vidyanathan. Full vote.

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