Dewdrops Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
Dewdrops
I look at dawn's dewy fall—
Virtual pearls they all,
Nature's tears of joy!
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Haiku | 16.01.2019 |
Wow, what a wonderful haiku. As if I have seen the early dawn's dewdrops.at a close range. So beautifully and so vividly depicted. Brilliantly penned.
To continue, a few poets have done so and pointed out and I have been always grateful to them. Also one can use the mail if not these columns. Thank you.
Thank you Rose Marie for such beautiful comments. May be this Haiku is good. You have by now read and reviewed a number of poems. But I'm sure there are a few not so good, some so so, and yet others not good enough. May I invite you to freely point out such points, of course in view of the guidelines of this site one can't be so critical. But if two poets have a good amount of goodwill and understanding feedback would be taken positively.
Welcome to my poems Jennifer Birchall and thanks for your comments.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 10:21:50 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A great Haiku sir! You have briefly expressed the joy and sorrow of nature in just a few words that can be expanded into a thesis..............10