Devistation Touched Dead (Fostercare My Thoughts About Being Taken Away) Poem by Amber Zenisek

Devistation Touched Dead (Fostercare My Thoughts About Being Taken Away)

Rating: 5.0


my soul commerce me,
chamber of death,
is all I see,
wish it would disapear,
and never return,
suffering death,
condeming me, feeding off me,
all this hate in me,
please condem me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chad Fisher 22 January 2007

I agree with Sam. You have great talent indeed.

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Sam Finley 19 January 2007

Hmm, a bit complicated, but it means something alright. When life gets you down, it can be pretty crappy. As I said before you have talent, just like the many around who also writes poetry. You have a gothic feel to your writing, very dark. I like your style. I'll write about anything.

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