Determination (Tanka) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Determination (Tanka)

Rating: 4.7


a baby spider
weaves its first web between leaves
but dizzy by wind
on an invisible thread
still hangs determination

Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: determination,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 04 October 2016

Very well written, learning for the baby and I am sure hards ways will leave impact on learning.10+++

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Rajesh Thankappan 03 October 2016

Hang on! Hang on! Hang on! Of course I am speaking of the gritty little spider. Beautiful imagery. Certainly a 10.

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