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*****Destiny Of Our Lives******

When the life blossoms
Destiny engraved in our lives
When virtue and vice sway to and fro
Energized and driven by supernatural forces

When we are grown up
Our lives started to face challenges
When we encounter distress
Our lives impregnated with tears and worries
That is the destiny of our lives.......

Sometimes our lives tinged and
Embroilled with joys and sorrows
Destiny inflicting poison and evil into our lives
Destiny can make or mar our lives
Destiny inspires our lives to prosperity
It can perish our prospects
Fortune and fate tossing each other
End of lives salunated with blessings

Dulakshi Wakista Copyright 2009

Submitted: Tuesday, June 23, 2009
Edited: Sunday, February 14, 2010


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  • Marie Bliss (4/4/2010 12:15:00 AM)

    Dulakshi is magic, her destiny conspires to endow her with magical powers and insight to match. Love it.

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  • Punsara Amarasinghe (3/17/2010 2:04:00 AM)

    I think its displays yur life prospective on destiny..In fact human fate is very uncanny matter it has a power to topple our lives to doom.......at the same time it leads us to the top of the power......this is the magic of destiny...but dont consent FATE to vanquish your deep soul......Be the mistress of yur DESTINY....then destiny will be yur slave......How ever I must admire yur vivid poetical ability....yu have expressed yur strange ideas in very wide flow.Good work....!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/26/2010 7:23:00 AM)

    When we are grown up
    Our lives started to face challenges
    When we encounter distress
    Our lives impregnated with tears and worries
    That is the destiny of our lives.......lifeis full of challanges we must over come it.. lovleypoem and beautifully crafted....10

    read mine.... my fiend in mirrpor////// what happens if......

  • Iron Panda 23™ (2/24/2010 8:36:00 AM)

    i love this...its beautiful! !

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (2/15/2010 4:51:00 AM)

    a truth on destiny...which man perhaps will not understand and can never tamper with till the end

  • John Oconnell (2/13/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    thank you for your compliment as regards 'soft rains'.
    i find your poem well written and the content mature.
    please keep up the good work,
    john

  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/4/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    this is a very inspirational write indeed... and well i m 21, i m sort of scared when i see the challenges that lies ahead.. i wish destiny will treat me better.. oh! ! is that just wishful thinking! ! ! .. ahh! by the way some times we have to get control of our destiny andd our actions.. anyway this is a nice write indeed! ! dulakshi! ! !
    10++

    regards
    shan

  • Eden Demessie (6/23/2009 2:51:00 PM)

    like it.cool you are a good poet keep on writing.

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