Desire Poem by Seema Aarella
Desire
(Inspired by Mr.Arkay Das's wonderful poem 'Desire')
My desire, in tandem with feral pleasure
Tidally rises, falls, and rises again
On mortal body bow, a pointed sin cursor
Soulless and weak, slips, fails again
On ice capped mount an austere pleasure
Mutates, revives and refines again
Lying on thorn bed, in penance posture
To crush his desire, by hammer of pain
A newborn desire of immature pleasure
Reaches fails and reaches again
From within the cradle, cosy and secure
It strives to touch and feel its domain
On crutches his desire, sans all pleasure
He limps and stops and limps again
Until the shadow of death in usher
Detached the bond of desire chain.
rk's poem read, and I can see how inspired you are. Seema, you have dealt with the theme in all its dimensions. very well constructed.10 Mamta
very well expressed poem..excellent and bold writng..10++++
Great followup of desire. I liked the style as long as the theme is yours.10
superb, superb and an extremely great piece, I'm unable to choose which of those lines would be my fav...coz each and every line is written so passionately, another jewel for my treasure(favs) ....I can relate these lines to me mosty 'Lying on thorn bed, in penance posture To crush his desire, by hammer of pain'...bravo, bravo, bravo thanks for sharing, many..many 10'ssssssssss and A'sssssss for this master piece rgds asif
Masterfully written... For me desire works like an Antidepressant drug; means it always pushes me up, whenever I am down... Desires keep the life in motion and life would gradually end, if there would be no desire... This is the beauty of life that it is never constant and desires play a great role in this process of fall and rise... I would quote one of my favourite philosopher of all times, Volatire... 'I have wanted to kill myself a hundred times, but somehow I am still in love with life...' I think you got what I tried to convey... This is a lovely read Seema, but I don't know, why my heart and mind is hankering for more... This is the Desire... :) Thanks for sharing Regards, Kamran
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4/25/2024 9:24:40 AM # 1.0.0.1119
it is a great feeling knowing that my DESIRE has inspired this poem, i reserve my right to comment on this poem later when i read it between the lines.