Desert Spirit Poem by QalmeTari Misterres of Death Nat. Norville

Desert Spirit

Rating: 5.0


I roamed in the desert
The sand is before me
I continue on my path,
Then a castle rises in front of me.

I see a prince in the garden
His hair is gold like the sun
His eyes the color of the sky
His cloak the color of midnight
And upon his head is a crown of silver stars.

He looks up from a wounded animal and he sees me.
I can see the sadness in his eyes.
I ask him if the animal is dead
He says no, and I offer to help
His eyes start to sparkle
I go to the wounded animal and pray
The wound is healed
The prince then looks at me
And I can see the love in his eyes
He asks if I would like a tour of the castle,
I say yes

We talk for hours about different subjects
As we go into the garden that night
I felt I was in love with this prince
He asks if I would like to stay with him
My answer is yes.

He then takes a cloak and puts it around me
The cloak is the color of the sky.
He also takes a crown of gold stars
And puts it on my head

I have fallen in love with a spirit
Who has in return loved me
He is known as Desert Spirit
He is Jesus Christ
The Lord God Almighty.

Critics welcome.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 17 April 2008

A deeply spiritual piece of work Natasha, nice imagery too. Well done. Andrew

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Natasha, I am not a Christian, so, I'm glad your title didn't give the fact away that you obviously are. I might not have read it if it had. I'm glad that I found this poem tonight, however. My fiance and I spend a great deal of time out in the desert, and we have 'religious' experiences there quite frequently as well. It's so silent and so still....and if there is a god...I think we find him/her/it there too. Thanks for sharing.

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