Deep Thoughts Poem by Seth Mutau

Deep Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


Lying here, silent and lonely,
thoughts fill my lonely mind.
Should I capture the thoughts or
let them go?

Feelings begin to creep in, these true
feelings are attached with emotions and with
deep emotions comes the images of YOU.

the wind whispers your name softly as it
blows through my window…..my heart tries
to speak but it’s words never catch the AIR.


saying I LOVE YOU is very hard. even the wind doesn’t let me..
I wonder if I ever say it you’ll love me back


dedicated to : sabrina kawana

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 22 November 2008

Seth, what i must say is that at least you give this poem to 'her' to read! And you would have said what u want to. A beautiful poem for a beautiful girl!

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

a sad but sweet poem on sincere love...well written, Seth...10

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