Deep Shadows! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Geoff Warden

Deep Shadows! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Deep in the candor of a foolish heart
the flame of your soul does ignite
deep in the hollow of my essence
I have learned of your luminous light

Deep in a soul so shallow
you choose to enter upon
no worldly goods can compare
To the love of this one

Deep in the shadow of misconceived
is a spirit....the likes unknown
water the seed thou has planted
for thy love thou has shown

Deep in the heart of a soulful cry
from the depth of my very being
a spirit filled weep, incomplete
your enlightenment keeps teasing.

Deep in the very place of mine
a room of entangled delight
your spirit holds the only key
only you fill the room with light...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deanna More 30 January 2007

Pristine thoughts... flood the mind, surging like a Water Fall from the first line! I truly enjoyed this poem.(A 10 for you!) Deanna xx .

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Duncan Wyllie 04 June 2006

Beautiful, a door and an opening, what a wonderful thought, light lies behind, Love duncan x

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SIR G....GOOD NEWS IZ THAT I LIKE THIS PIECE FROM IT'S METERIND & TIGHT CONSTRUCTION DOWN TO IT'S STELLAR IMAGHERY.............. THE BAD NEWS IS THAT IN SUBMITTING THIS POEM, YOU MUST HAVE CLOSED OFF YOUR USER RATING METER...GO BACK TO ''EDIT YOUR POEMS'' & YOUWILL SEE WHAT I MEAN AT THE BOTTOM OF SCREEN...TELL TRACEY SHE HAS THE SAME SITUATION ON 1 OF HER POEMS (I THINK THE 1 ON YOU OR HERSELF) SHE'LL FIND IT...LET ME KNOW WHEN ALL IS DONE & I'LL JOURNEY BACK OVER TO BOTH SITES & GIV YA YIR JUS' REWARDZZZ! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Patricia Gale 23 May 2006

Deep love and thinking in this one Geoff. WELL DONE! Patricia

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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