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Deception d'Amour (Love Deception)

I do not have to tell you anything,
The way you have treated me,
As if I were the thorn upon your rose,
A total stranger, I impose,
My adoration, God only knows,
That this is no fictional sensation,
That suddenly was born, hallucination,
From some forgotten dream.

Then I awakened and realized,
That our happiness was never close at hand,
That you had left me alone upon this land,
And I never even had a chance to say,
That I would die, the day you went away.

Submitted: Friday, October 26, 2012


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  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/10/2012 4:06:00 PM)

    Your words had me entranced! as they always do.

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  • Poetheart (going) (11/9/2012 12:00:00 PM)

    Your poems are full of stronger love and i like so much your words.The way you put together and make a dance! ! !

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  • Poetheart (going) (11/9/2012 12:00:00 PM)

    Your poems are full of stronger love and i like so much your words.The way you put together and make a dance! ! !

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  • Sandra Feldman (11/8/2012 6:37:00 PM)

    You're right but I could do without some of the pain I'm runing out of band aids
    Thank your kind words. You are becoming my most faithful reader, how can you stand it? (soportar mis fastidiosos poemas) ? ? Gracias infinitas.

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  • Poetheart (going) (11/7/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    Love it! ! ! So pain in your words! ! ! Pain is good its the other side of love! ! ! ! ! Beautiful

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