Death Of A Moon - Part 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Death Of A Moon - Part 1
Night planned a vicious game
To trap and kill the moon
Stars joined the plan
Thinking they can reflect
and shine bright
clouds gathered together
to hide the killing
forest helped them too
everything in minute details
were taken care
the path of the moon was tracked
to the perfection
finally time and date
was decided
till this time the sea was also
part of the plan
when the time approached
sea revealed everything to the moon
and hearing this Moon became sad
It shirked that day
And next day appeared to strike a deal
The bargain went like this….
The moon will not appear full every night
Instead it will gradually reduce
its size and beam and for one day
It will not appear at all
The Moon had no choice to escape
than to agree with the deal.....
Great poem aout the moon and your feeling about it is so wonderful.Thank you for sharing.
wowwwwww creative write yo..now can't wait for the part2 I hope the moon can outshine the schemers and plotters and shine to it's fullest all over again. Till then lets enjoy the changing facets of the moon. beautiful poem.10+++
I fervently await the conclusion. The patient and compromising moon will do what's best
Brilliantly written poem. Creativity at its peak. I will read all parts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderful poem Asim.. I guess this poem is about creativity. Most artists would agree that they can create only once in a while.. Like the moon appears only once in its full shape, the creative faculties of an artist also comes out once in a while in its full strength.. The artist then creates their art and wonder where did they lose their inspirtation.. Wonderfully crafted. Thanks for sharing.
An incredible interpretation of a stunning piece. It never fails to amazes me the insight one can gain through reading another's comments on a piece. Loved the poem and appreciate the meaning you've given to it. Now to read part 2!