Death And Life, A Twain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Death And Life, A Twain

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And death once told a much defeated life:
Life is no life if lived on edge of knife,
If struggles for survivals soaked in strife,
You see, life comes with many a death rife.

But pure death I'm, with death is rife all life,
And heard I've of life asking on deathbed,
Pray, tell me Death, how long ere I'm all dead?
Life lives on a daily dose of strife rife.

To this said I: straightening up, stiff head,
Moments when like long minutes stretch ahead,
Minutes when look like endless hours instead,
Hours hang for days, days for years ere life's dead.

Remember, life's lived moment to moment,
And measured is in a moving moment,
Forget not: death alone is permanent,
I dwell in life from birth, and live dormant;

Freedom there's from life nor yet from death's pall,
Death changes only bricks of prison wall,
Petty, O Life and Death, seems your quarrel,
None taller is, none on a pedestal.

Life traces tiniest of graph nigh blurred,
Poem of life's metered nor yet measured,
It begins much like a fledgling young bird,
Next breath when taken not, end is unfurled.

Eons pass sans measure for endless time,
Nor does clock tick, nor dare at hours to chime,
Rocks break to sand, time stills nary a rhyme,
Stones grind unto grains, earth turns into lime,

A journey of countless births starts with life,
That ends when death triumphs over all strife.
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Musings | 09.08.12 |
Topic: life, death, journey

Wednesday, December 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,journey,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 11 December 2019

Rife! ! Death! Birth and life; Only to die one day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Thanks for visiting with your marvelous input

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2019

A wonderful piece of work carrying great substance sir. Each stanza is a poem itself! Your sixth stanza is my favorite one......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

It appears you have read it thoroughly, thanks for appreciation

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 December 2019

A journey of countless births starts with life, That ends when death is triumphed over strife./// really great writings; masterly crafted life is everything and makes a journey to its eternity, the death

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

Thank you dear MB, you're absolutely right, without death this journey can'; t be eternal.

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Rajnish Manga 11 December 2019

Life is no life if lived on edge of knife, Life lives on a daily dose of strife rife.... //.... Exquisitely crafted poem with great insights into the philosophy of life and death. Reading it was a pleasure as well as a journey towards enlightenment. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 December 2019

'Journey towards enlightenment', thanks for these comments, I feel humbled coming as they are from a great poet himself. Thanks.

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