Dear God, Poem by Jamal Brown

Dear God,

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As I close my eyes and bow my head,
forgive me for all of the terrible things that
I've said.
Forgive me for all of the people that I have hurt today
and the people I have hurt in days past away.
I apoligize for not living by your life every waking
moment of mine.
I am a fallen saint,
and to get back-up it's
taking a little time.
I just want to say, thank you
for this day,
so that I may praise your name
with style and grace like a gentle
fallen rain.
I want you to know that even though alot of things
don't go as I planned,
I thank you for being on my side
when I get I trouble.
I thank you for taking a stand.
I pray that you
know you are everything in my life
from the begining to the end.
I would give you everything I have,
but I have nothing. I can
only give my heart to
live in.
Dear GOD, I'm so sorry for losing faith
when things go wrong. I
know I'm young and not out on my own yet,
but still somethings make it hard for me to stay strong.
So thanks to you I still love everyone
and I still have a heart that cares.
Dear GOD, I love you,
for this is my goodnight prayer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

apologizing for the wrong done, being grateful for whatever we have, thanking for the day.this poem has an essence I love.we sometimes lose faith, but there are ways out of our problems, there is light somewhere.

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I'm me 17 January 2010

very similar prayer to what I pray sometimes :) never lose hope and keep seeking God when you fall He's always there to pick you up, just go to Him. shalom! -Cheng Zheng

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