Beautiful Mother Poem by Jamal Brown

This poem is a loving tribute to all good mothers, both those still with us, and also to those gone on to be with the Lord, enjoying in their motherly rewards.

You are too young to be able to examine yourself on what you feel, apart from what you think the world would want you to feel. In addition, you have that terrible lack of rhythm imposed on the world's youth by rap music. Read more 'good' poetry, learn about meter and structure and grammar. Continue to grow and to love. But examine who, what and why you love...and despise.

A lovely tribute to a great mum ceremoniously rich in tone. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Jamal.

I too was blessed with a beautiful mother and miss her very much. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to your mom and all those who were and are like her. A Beautiful poem - thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

God has blessed me with a beautiful mother.That's the way it goes. So I promised him that as long as he'd let me live, I'd love and cherish her 'till my last breath I noo paralllel for mother.. i still weep for here...10 read mine o, mother, mom i miss you, mother and i wept.... miss i miss u

a beautiful poem full of love great job keep wrighting No Reason To Care

Forget what Cat tiger says you feel how you feel. You're young but that doesn't push away your feelings for anything. And maybe you don't listen to rap music or is Cat Tiger saying that because you have a black name. I'm black and I listen to Rock music ^-^ anyways that was a lovely poem. I can see how much you love your mother...this was excellent -Liz