Dear Brother Poem by something changing

Dear Brother

Rating: 4.3


dear brother
will i ever see you again?
or have i lost another friend?
i know you had to go
but i want you to know
that i miss you more than i can show

dear brother
it's been a while
since you last made me smile
and i know you had to leave
but i want you here with me
because i miss you terribly

dear brother
will you ever come home?
or am i never to know?
and i wish you didn't have to go
but i want you to know
that i miss you more than i can show

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

There are lines repeated here that there is no need for. The writer dorsn't have a lot to say which is why she did it. It might have been nice if she had sinply said, I love you. Maybe she will, next time. GW62

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Kiki cupcake 14 February 2008

thats beautiful..luv the last line especially i was deeply moved..

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