Days Of Darkness Poem by Bonnie Collins

Days Of Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Taken with the tides, and rushed
away to sea, with clouds of darkness
shadowing behind, was what has
been left like the remains
of a drifted piece of dritwood in my soul

Kinders of burnt, but yet once
very innocent and trusting heart,
had now been left to heal the
break inwhich you had left behind

Gazing upon the horizon, looking for
some sort of reprieve, wondering
if this was an appitizer of hell

Gloriously, miraculously, and with
all the power within me, I have gotten
over the days of the Darkness, however
my love, the sun now shines in my life,

But never will it shine with the glow you
once shed upon me.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 19 February 2008

A very sad piece. Enjoyed it though. Thanks for sharing. Craig.

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Tracker Ogryphon 24 February 2008

A very strong poem Bonnie. Good write. Thanks Tracker

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~ Jon London ~ 07 May 2008

A beautifully written piece of emotion..As heart rendering as it was to read, you expressed these feelings with such believability that its leaves the reader wanting to read on. Great poem 10/10 best wishes Jon

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Bob Gibson 26 November 2008

I have felt that unrestrained, passionate love of my youth and i have felt the love of my offspring its a delicate balance, there is no choice we have loved, lost, and won again!

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008

Days of darkness over...but the real brightness of life lost and left behind...strong poem expressive, beautifully presented...ten for this, Bonnie

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Robert Sheridan 20 September 2008

Bonnie, So eloquently quilled with your 'magic ink'... 'Days of Darkness' rocks the house! Write on friend, write on! ! Be safe, Robert

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Bob Gibson 12 September 2008

Such a powerful poem bonnie, loss! is soo hard

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Andrew Blakemore 20 May 2008

I love this poem Bonnie. You paint a rich contrast of loss with the hope of a new beginning. Wonderful poem. Love, Andrew x

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Bonnie Collins

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