Day One -Haiku+ Poem by ray Schreiber

Day One -Haiku+

Rating: 5.0


happy that I came
to be sitting at this beach
her head in my hand

-my heart at her feet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lillian Thomas 04 November 2009

This is beautiful! I added it to my favorites. Form falls away at this point and all that is left is words that form a crystalline structure like a gem or snowflake.

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ray Schreiber

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Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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