...So Special. (A Cinquain Poem) Poem by ray Schreiber
...So Special. (A Cinquain Poem)
Rating: ★2.7
looking
up from her knees
soft gray eyes finding mine
her moist lips part and say ' I love
these things'.
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4/19/2024 10:29:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A.C would like this cinquain poem... the last line leaves me perplexed as to what is 'these things'...her knees? regards
A moment of intimacy that should have ended with I love you ended with the most impersonal and disturbing words imaginable. (I used a word that must have been censored in my first reply, I hope this is clearer) .
If Adelaide Crapsey liked this cinquain I would be honored beyond words, thank you. To answer your question... a moment of intimacy was reduced to with those two words. Ergo, the ironic title.