Day Dreaming Poem by Tara Chettur

Day Dreaming

Rating: 5.0


Your love mesmerizes me,
In whisper… I want to,
Disclose the truth.
Want to have a fling with you,
I can’t express this to anyone but to myself,
I can’t scream, the echo will bother
But I can day dream abt you, quitely!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mayur Soni 12 December 2009

echoes of love never bother, so scream ur love. nice approach.

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Afzal Shauq 27 June 2009

I write short poem and love to read short poems... you are really doing goo short poem with innovative approach and the ideas are different... appreciate your style of making poems..and say go on...future is yours..10++++++++++++++++++==

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Kesav Easwaran 07 January 2009

...'I can’t scream, the echo will bother'... this reflective line i liked most...beautiful...'scream' and 'dream' go very well in the context of the write complimenting each other...good romantic piece, Tara...10

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Keith Hendrickson 06 January 2009

short and sweet. i liked it a lot

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 January 2009

a subtle expression of love. nice, flawless

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