Dating Site Your Haunting Smile Poem by Luz Hanaii
Dating Site Your Haunting Smile
I saw your face
and I became alive again
your picture seem to stare at me
that bright smile
that seem to call my name
I sent a mail hoping you
would respond
That night I could not sleep
that haunting smile of yours
sketched in my head
kept me awake
wondering
what you'd
be like?
I went to work
thought of you
all day
those eyes
that hair
but mostly
that haunting smile
sketched into my head
The day was hard
the hours long
people would talk
and I'd respond
knowing I soon be home
alone at last
to check
the dating site
And find...
you'd not respond?
what grief!
what pain!
you didn't find me
good enough.
Again a mesmerizing poem! Great imagery and beautiful style. I really loved it. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
The nature of human's preference could be so hurtful to the others and the poem is telling us in a such beautiful way how someone could get hurt from someone we never know before. Excellent poem. Keep writing my friend.
That night I could not sleep that haunting smile of yours sketched in my head kept me awake wondering what you'd be like? finally you did not respond.......... dating sites and its problems. waiting for a love sign. beautifully described dear poet.. tony
Very soft to say time is never stable.. lyric is well crafted and words are dancing with humour and awareness. Thanks for sharing. Regards.10+++++
And find... you'd not respond? what grief! what pain! you didn't find me good enough. An interesting poem.
Passions galore in your poem..loved the quest you exhibited.A good and exquisite write.
Such an insightful poem, that makes me question this ages way of connecting romantically with people. The avatars we create out of bits and bites, to form a picture of a total stanger, and ultimately fail in filling in the blanks of who they are. Wonderfully written! Great job: D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Again a mesmerizing poem! Great imagery and beautiful style. I really loved it. Great write. Thanks for sharing.