Darkness Sets In Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Darkness Sets In

Rating: 5.0


sitting alone again
memories so near
cant get past fear
disgust for myself
pain always inside
and hurt in my eyes
no tears left to cry
waiting for the end
worthless and empty
cold heart shattered
shame overtaking
darkness sets in

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 25 October 2011

Another powerful poem. You show great emotion in your poems. Great write.

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Kara Towe 03 January 2012

Great write, really felt it, you have a way of reaching into anther's heart and making it all so clear. Be assured you are not alone, God smiles upon you.

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Kara Towe 03 January 2012

Such sadness. Have no shame, you are wonderful.

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Nick Kler 13 November 2011

I left my dreams in your eyes And forgot about them

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(De Va) 10 November 2011

I must agree with Josh and Dave...powerful...hugs n blessings

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Joshua Hillard 30 October 2011

Absolutely beautiful, your words are so powerful, and hold so much emotion. You truly are a gifted writer, and I hope you continue with it! Wow, to know we share the same pain, and yet the words speak the same truth. Magnificent, absolutely great work! !

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