Darkness Falls Poem by Corey Bowen

Darkness Falls

Rating: 5.0


Your sad,
Your mad,
Why am I this way,
Hate myself and all around me,

Why was I born,
into world that corrupt,
Molesters Rapists Pedophiles,

In my room where I lie awake,
Shifting dreams,
Threw the shifting sand,
Threw the darkness you lay,

When darkness falls,
Ill be near,
When blood is spilled,
I can be found,
When children cry,
Ill be there to save them,
When darkness falls
All shall fall,
In city of black,
Where we shall rise all together.

Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,darkness,emotions,life and death,night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I Am 15 Now Just Turned 15 To be Exact And Recently Ive Started Writeing Poetry For Over 2 Years My School Person That Talks Me Off And On Said My Poems Are Very Good And She Asked Me If I Should Maybe Share Them To Other People So I Was Very Nervice And Well Scared I Hope Everyone Does Enjoy The Poem And If There Enjoyed I Have Many More, This Poem Was Created When I Got Bored In Class And Started Contimplateing Life In General.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 16 January 2016

Life sometimes can bring in the darkness of the world, but the sun will shine again Profound poem.

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Rajnish Manga 11 January 2016

We welcome you on this Forum, Corey. Your first poem gives an insight into your world. Poetry is indeed a remedy from boredom but it is much more than that- an experience, an expression and a spiritual bond with the world around. I see in your poem a commendable maturity of thought and a concern for others. I would like to quote a few lines from your poem: Why was I born / into world that corrupt / Molesters Rapists Pedophiles /...In city of black / Where we shall rise all together.

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Corey Bowen 12 January 2016

thank you.

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