Darkened Garden Poem by Mandy Lee

Darkened Garden

Rating: 2.7


Wilted blades streak the lawn
of this cold and empty heart.
Death and vice and love's despair
have come to play their part.

They've stripped bare the trees
of gold and colour that used to grow.
Even trees and air can feel the ache,
of the love I used to know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Lovely, sad little poem.

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Nicklas Leow 01 July 2012

Every sentence capture the picture of a person who had lost an important person perfectly. ''Death and vice and love's despair '' I like this sentence the most.

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