Dancing Tears Poem by maria rahman

Dancing Tears

Rating: 4.8


They appeared at the rim,
but refused to come over it.
I don't know why--
they seemed frightened a bit.

For a little while....
I too shared their fear.........
For one everlasting moment,
I didn't know what to do.

I remembered them flowing by,
And creating a satisfying hollow
somewhere deep within; with a sigh
I let the memory flash by.

From a dark corner somewhere,
I heard a child's cries.....
Crying out with all its sorrows-
River of tears from its eyes.

They were there, still there-
They glittered and they danced around.....
Sparkling-yet with unfulfilled wishes,
looking to hide somewhere underground......

Where no one would see me,
where no one would come.
Where i would only hear the child's cries
Where-I would die--
...with the tears--
still dancing in my eyes...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 December 2009

This is a beautifully sad poem written in deep feelings of sorrow, very well described. Keep it up Maria. The title is very catchy...10 Best Wishes Naseer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 September 2008

A beautiful poem and my 10 with it. Dancing tears, a nice image. Wonderful title.

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Why so sad? After sorrow comes joy...life is very dificult in your country and I pray that someday it will be better.There is always hope and faith to help dry away the tears.Very poignant poem.I wish you the best life can offer.A ten from me.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2008

Lovely expression indeed. i am giving 10 for this. The title ammmmmmazing! !

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